PPHEAD'S 夢不落格

剛剛改到一篇高三生寫的作文，很感人可是不禁讓人懷疑....這是真的嗎？

po出來跟大家分享，不過大家要忍耐一下文法錯，以下是原文。

“ The most unforgettable thing in my memory is traced back to
my childhood. At the age of seven, when I played with my best friend, Peter,
I saw his alcoholic father. On Moon Festival night, we had a barbecue in
front of my house. We were very excited because we were going to be
elementary students. My parents held the party for us to celebrate it.
We talked about our dreams. I said I would be a superman to rescue the
people who were in need. They bursted into laughters apart from Peter.
We saw that Peter was upset and tears fell down on his face. He said his
mom left him because of his father. She couldn't tolerate his bad father,
who liked to drink and hit his mom. He lived with his father only. He said
his dream was to be a doctor to transform his father. On hearing the story,
We all cried and my parents had no exceptions. After a while, a man walked
toward us. " Peter, what are you doing? Follow me to go home!" Peter's father
said. Then he clapped Peter on his face, taking him roughly. Peter started crying,
but his father clapped him again. My parents intented to stop it, but it was no use.
Peter was taken to his home. We had on idea how could we do, and just kept our
fingers crossed that Peter would be great. However, the tragedy happened,
Peter died the next day.

We blamed ourselves that if we had taken care of Peter, maybe it would not happen.
........."